Broken

So quickly the erasure has begun
as pieces of me are being removed.
From that heart, I’ve been gutted out
from that mind, my reflection turned into shards.

I was suppose to know it was happening
that the coils my hair makes no longer brought joy
and understand that a betrayal was for me to take notice.

But it doesn’t matter now, as all the tenderness
as all the dreams, like abandoned leaves, dwindle away 
trapped in a dusty old box filled with memories, well forgotten
displaced by some new desire to excite the tête-à-tête.

So quickly the erasure has begun, in one day
what once was comforting as a simple embrace, a brush of the hands
is being replaced with talk of sleeping arrangements.

  1. October 1, 2009 at 4:40 am | #1

    laugh i surely did, but not quite sure i should

  2. October 1, 2009 at 10:13 pm | #2

    It is wonderfully made poem, but very sad.

  3. October 2, 2009 at 10:40 pm | #3

    Another heart wrenching poem from you – but that just means it works!

  4. October 3, 2009 at 1:41 pm | #4

    much lonely here, m’dear

  5. October 4, 2009 at 7:20 pm | #5

    The twist at the end left me uncertain as to whether I should remain saddened. That is shiny glinting brilliant.

  6. October 6, 2009 at 7:49 am | #6

    that last light. sheez. it is a killer.

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